--- gcl.old/debian/in.gcl.templates	2007-11-25 16:48:30.704811977 +0530
+++ gcl/debian/in.gcl.templates	2007-12-19 11:56:03.350211134 +0530
@@ -1,26 +1,38 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: gcl@EXT@/default_gcl_ansi
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Use the work-in-progress ansi build by default?
+_Description: Use the work-in-progress ANSI build by default?
  GCL is in the process of providing an ANSI compliant image in addition to
- its traditional CLtL1 image still in production use.  Please see the
- README.Debian file for a brief description of these terms.  Setting this
- variable will determine which image you will use by default on executing
- 'gcl@EXT@'.  You can locally override this choice by setting the GCL_ANSI
+ its traditional CLtL1 image still in production use.
+ .
+ Please see the README.Debian file for a brief description of these terms.
+ Choosing this option will determine which image will be used by default
+ when executing 'gcl@EXT@'.
+ .
+ This setting may be overridden by setting the GCL_ANSI
  environment variable to any non-empty string for the ANSI build, and to
- the empty string for the CLtL1 build, e.g. GCL_ANSI=t gcl@EXT@.  The
- flavor of the build in force will be reported in the initial startup
+ the empty string for the CLtL1 build, e.g. GCL_ANSI=t gcl@EXT@. The
+ currently enforced build flavor will be reported in the initial startup
  banner.
 
 Template: gcl@EXT@/default_gcl_prof
 Type: boolean
 _Description: Use the profiling build by default?
- GCL now has optional support for profiling via gprof.  Please see the
- documentation
- for si::gprof-start and si::gprof-quit for details. As this build is slower
- than builds without gprof support, it is not recommended for final production use.
- You can locally override the default choice made here
- by setting the
- GCL_PROF environment variable to any non-empty string for profiling
- support, and to the empty string for the more optimized builds, e.g.
- GCL_PROF=t gcl@EXT@.  If profiling is enabled, this will be reported in
- the initial startup banner.
+ GCL has optional support for profiling via gprof.
+ .
+ Please see the documentation for si::gprof-start and si::gprof-quit
+ for details. As this build is slower than builds without gprof
+ support, it is not recommended for final production use.
+ .
+ Set the GCL_PROF environment variable to the empty string for more
+ optimized builds, or any non-empty string for profiling support; e.g.
+ GCL_PROF=t gcl@EXT@. If profiling is enabled, this will be reported
+ in the initial startup banner.
--- gcl.old/debian/control	2007-11-25 16:48:30.704811977 +0530
+++ gcl/debian/control	2007-12-16 15:38:12.473983404 +0530
@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, ${gcc}, debconf (>= 1.2.0), emacs22 | emacsen
 Suggests: gcl-doc
-Description: GNU Common Lisp compiler
+Description: GNU Common Lisp compiler - binaries
  GNU Common Lisp (GCL) is a Common Lisp compiler and interpreter
- implemented in C, and complying mostly with the standard set 
- forth in the book "Common Lisp, the Language I".  It attempts
- to strike a useful middle ground in performance and portability
- from its design around C.
+ implemented in C, and complying mostly with the standard set forth in
+ the book "Common Lisp, the Language (1st edition)". It attempts to
+ take a useful middle ground in performance and portability by way of
+ its design around C.
  .
- This package contains the Lisp system itself.  Documentation 
+ This package contains the Lisp system itself. The documentation 
  is provided in the gcl-doc package.
 
 Package: gcl-doc
@@ -24,13 +24,13 @@
 Architecture: all
 Conflicts: gclinfo
 Replaces: gclinfo
-Description: Documentation for GNU Common Lisp
+Description: GNU Common Lisp compiler - documentation
  GNU Common Lisp (GCL) is a Common Lisp compiler and interpreter
- implemented in C, and complying mostly with the standard set 
- forth in the book "Common Lisp, the Language I".  It attempts
- to strike a useful middle ground in performance and portability
- from its design around C.
+ implemented in C, and complying mostly with the standard set forth in
+ the book "Common Lisp, the Language (1st edition)". It attempts to
+ take a useful middle ground in performance and portability by way of
+ its design around C.
  .
- This package contains Documentation in info format of both the
- system internals, as well as the graphical interface currently
+ This package contains the GCL documentation in info format for the
+ system internals as well as the graphical interface currently
  implemented in Tcl/Tk.