Mario Mommer mommer@igpm.rwth-aachen.de writes:
What do you guys think?
Looks good.
cafe -> café
The first one is a real introductory text, well suited for newbies and experienced programmers which also includes an excellent reference section. -> "and includes an excellent"
learn Common Lisp by trying it out on really hard problems, and seeing how it enables you -> "[no comma] and see how"
...oh, and don't miss the online tutorials page at CLiki. -> "The online tutorials page at Cliki is very helpful." [Something less "incidental" :-)]
there is the Common Lisp Hyperspec (a.k.a CLHS), -> "(also known as CLHS or simply 'Hyperspec')"
But trust me on this: these are probably the most powerful editors ever to be written, even if they might look slightly trashy to you -> [leave out the trust me] (you should also mention vi just for good measure; having newbies thinking the must learn Emacs to do CL programming is a tough one to swallow)
Erik.