Clemens Fruhwirth clemens@endorphin.org writes:
Here is my draft of an update to CLIM tutorial.
http://clemens.endorphin.org/A%20Guided%20Tour%20of%20CLIM%202006-draft.pdf
I plan to put it into the mcclim repository under Doc/, so others can enhance it if desired. I will probably post an other update myself, as I originally planned to write more (incremental updates, accepting- values and a spreadsheet examples are missing). But I rather felt like it's better to release it early than never.
Feedback is appreciated.
I've read it through, and from this first pass have a list of small typos, stylistic changes and the like that I'd like to suggest. I would have sent a diff with the changes, but unfortunately the current source is one-line-per-paragraph, which would make the diff extremely noisy and unclear. Would it be possible to insert line breaks in the source?
The thing I would most like to see in terms of the document as a whole, I think, is a changebar (somewhat like in the second edition of CLtL) indicating the changed material, so that the reader can see what is essentially unchanged from the 1990 version.
Cheers,
Christophe