31 Jan
2006
31 Jan
'06
1:35 p.m.
Christophe Rhodes csr21@cam.ac.uk writes:
Clemens Fruhwirth clemens@endorphin.org writes:
Here is my draft of an update to CLIM tutorial.
I've read it through, and from this first pass have a list of small typos, stylistic changes and the like that I'd like to suggest. I would have sent a diff with the changes, but unfortunately the current source is one-line-per-paragraph, which would make the diff extremely noisy and unclear. Would it be possible to insert line breaks in the source?
Find attached a diff against the linebroken version in Doc/Guided-Tour. These changes are suggestions -- where I've picked up on something, it may be that you can think of a better way to express it than I have.
Cheers,
Christophe